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UNTITLED 1

by ~jnienna

The world falls in an unending oblivion
The stars dawne to their mornings,
finally comes to realize the atrocity in it.
Is it coming to a stop?
Or I'm just losing my sense of reason?

Standing on a fine line
I walk the unknown.
Sun shines above
I cant see anything.
I see their touch but i cant feel anything.
I watch the world from below,
Everything isnt what it is.
Hiding under the cloth of music,
The peace it gives.

I've stopped looking
I'm glad.
But still unable to express my thoughts
Does that make me insane?
I guess so
Do i still need the reason
Just to go beyond my boundaries?

Perhaps of death?
But how would the world respond to that?
If i would go out in the open,
Do things i hindered doing
Afraid of criticism and ridicule
Wouldnt it be too much for the rationality of what the society might call normal?
:iconjnienna:
something which spewed out of my mind

and once again i was in that utopia.
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:iconbloodhunter:
XD why didnt cha name it????!!?!? XDDDDDD waaaaaaaah its nice~!!!!! but to be honest..it lacks something..><' sowee sowee~~if Im all being mean to you D: I dont know whats missing but its something in your mind not mine X3

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"Dream like you'll live forever, Live like you'll die tomorrow"
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:iconjnienna:
i guess i know what you're saying... it kinda lacks ending doesnt it.. it seems unfinished. but i have to end it that way. that time, my mind wants to burst and if i had pushed myself, i would have ended up crying in front of my computer. and im in the office mind you so i dont think that would be appropriate.

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the wind unseen
but when it howls,
it is heard.
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:iconbloodhunter:
I understand..Dont push yourself to write you know because you dont have to..It merely flows thorugh you then you would truly understand that it really came form your heart..Dont make life miserable..It would only make living for you longer. =)

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"Dream like you'll live forever, Live like you'll die tomorrow"
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:iconjnienna:
so that's why i couldnt end it properly. haha.
but the funny thing is? have you seen my fave quote?
It's what best describes me... Quod me nutriet me destruit. that's in latin, i've seen the spanish version of the quote but there's no denying the similarity.
and like what i said it's what best describes me. i cant explain but it is.

--
the wind unseen
but when it howls,
it is heard.
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:iconbloodhunter:
I see..^^ but its okay you know..sometimes unfinished works are more beautiful than finished ones because you know that person tried hard to finish it but maybe never could...and so we know how much they strive hard to do something the love..

--
"Dream like you'll live forever, Live like you'll die tomorrow"
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:iconjnienna:
there you go. you understand. ^__^

--
the wind unseen
but when it howls,
it is heard.
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:iconbloodhunter:
Yepperz I do..o_O I dunno why..

--
"Dream like you'll live forever, Live like you'll die tomorrow"
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:iconjnienna:
I do, its because you and i have the same length of brain waves... yikes sure hope not! m much more crazier than i let people know! hahahaha!

--
the wind unseen
but when it howls,
it is heard.
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:iconcry187:
I love this piece, why haven't I red it earlier. Well, too busy for myself I guess. :D

nothing is normal. Do not depend it on how the norms perceived it, even the norms do far ridiculous things.

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Who am I, a passerby? On these earthly lot, I came to sigh; my soul a stagnant tide.
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:iconjnienna:
thanks. coming from you? haha, appreciate it.

i think im turning into a lunatic. but do you believe that there's wisdom in madness?
geesh.

--
the wind unseen
but when it howls,
it is heard.
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